What a thrilling and suspenseful story! The gradual buildup of tension with the animal bones and the eerie atmosphere of the new house really draws the reader in. It captures that sense of unease perfectly, especially with the children’s reactions and the strange behavior of the neighbors. The twist with Hilton’s obsession and the discovery of the hidden treasure adds a fascinating layer to the narrative.
I love how it concludes with a sense of relief and closure, especially when the mysterious scratching turns out to be a friendly cat rather than something sinister. It really shifts the perspective from fear to comfort, making the house feel like a home after all.
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